I guess its alright, but you used the same words to rhyme with twice and some lines don't have rhymes?
Get a blunt, roll the weed, light it up, nigga,
Sippin on Gin and Juice fill up your cups, nigga,
The Westcoast back crackin' like it's 94',
So bitch get on your knees and give me head like it's 94',
And don't come up for air 'til the beat drop,
I'm the Doctors Advocate, call it a sneak peak,
at the mudafukn Detox, Take note grab a pen,
And let the world know the west is ridin' again,
I Graduated from Dre's school, top of my class,
Treat my switches like my bitches got me dropping that ass,
Still bangin' the chronic like doggiestyle came with it,
And I roll a sticky on my bitch back while I hit it,
I done been there, done that, had beefs and won that,
5 million records on 1 plaque, I hung that,
Still got Dr. Dre low ridin' in the 64',
When you see us, throw it up for the fukin' Westcoast.
I guess its alright, but you used the same words to rhyme with twice and some lines don't have rhymes?
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Who Is John Gault?
This is The games verse from California Vacation, not his own.
It could of been a-lot better if you wouldn't keep using the same words and had a little more Rhymes...
As so,
I grow my weed in the Westcoast,
Expensive ass coat on,
Now don't f*** with us, man you'll get lost.
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Damn, a ripped rap. No good at all then smh
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