My nab rab

[matrin12]

Uhm, dont go to hard on me


Yeah,
Im here to play, to play , to play
The game comes easy, my rhymes like weezy
No prob to make a line, no prob to rap a rhyme,
When i hit this beat, it will feel so good,
All my homies will dance in the hood
Time to show , how i flo
If u think ill let ya know how i got so fly
I guess ur high, Ill never tell u, why before i die

Listen playas
My rap is the shit
u all know ill be the next hit
Trust me homie im not playin
Im just sayin
I am the next 50
Get ur rap right, campared to me ur beats so shitty

Yeah , cuuuuuz
2pac comes back
trough my voice
with my rhymes
my lines
my flo
and u know
I am so pro
And everybody go
like yo, Eazy-Me u are the best, u make rap , standing out from the rest

But i aint here to brag , you already know i got swag

Peace out , haha

[HiddenoO]

No offense, but this rap sucked. Lmao

[matrin12]

Worth a try But i give up now ^^ Was bored and read trough the forum. SO i tries myself x)

[ogkush317]

man, work on your metaphors, and punchlines...u get 1/5 mics for trying

[matrin12]

Okai, ill try ^^

[vйß?™]

not soo good sorry

[Margherita]

"Yeah , cuuuuuz
2pac comes back
trough my voice
with my rhymes
my lines
my flo
and u know
I am so pro
And everybody go
like yo, Eazy-Me u are the best, u make rap , standing out from the rest"

That whole section was weak. Work on this.