AllStarz!

[Mokou-Sama]

Hi everyone!!
I saw a tutorial and I tried to do as it said but the outcome wasnt very good. So, I tried to do sth in my own and it came out sth like this:

[IMG]https://i641.photobucke*****m/albums/uu137/Xenoxblades/AllstarsExperiment.png[/IMG]

Please criticise.

[Scrcrw]

text doing nothing, u needa learn about text compo
other than that the two focals is distracting, its monotone and a horrible colour at that and to top it off it looks like u were stupid enough to save it as a gif

[Faux]

Stop using those same damn brushes.

[Mokou-Sama]

Stop using those same damn brushes.

I only used default brush o.O Which ones am I suposed to use lol

[Storm]

im sorry...
my eyes hurt

[Mokou-Sama]

im sorry...
my eyes hurt

Yeah, I quite understand that. I was trying text manipulation but I failed.

[apeguy]

Stop using those same damn brushes.

Remember what I said? He can only use those brushes

@gamer4evere I don't know what you did to the render but its really black. The text is in a horrible area and it's like on its side..and you put the text on the light source. And you have a spam load of brushing that I think you put randomly on there to make the empty space full. Oh, and can you show us the tutorial you read? I think the tutorial your reading is either bs or you complete tried to follow it and mess up.

[Parade]

I don't get it, why is the girl there? Is the girl suppose to be with the car?

[Ryguy]

Sig would be alright without the girl and if the car had a little more of a bold look to it. I won't repeat what everyone else said but....

you need to work on making your piece flow better and learn how to make things look like they belong there. If you look at everyone's signature in the posts above mine you'll notice that none of their focals struggle to fit in. It's all about atmosphere, work on that.

[Mokou-Sama]

Sig would be alright without the girl and if the car had a little more of a bold look to it. I won't repeat what everyone else said but....

you need to work on making your piece flow better and learn how to make things look like they belong there. If you look at everyone's signature in the posts above mine you'll notice that none of their focals struggle to fit in. It's all about atmosphere, work on that.

I will. (Probably I will always fail but I try)

[Ryguy]

Don't give up. And remember that less is more sometimes. If you mess up, delete stuff or use layer masks.

[Takari]

Try improving the colors.

[Mokou-Sama]

Try improving the colors.

I think ill just delete this, and start over with new material. I think that I might get something. Just wait. (Probably a lot, dont know when I will release sth good )