Can't tell if tits are showing or not
any tips to make it better? :\
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Can't tell if tits are showing or not
tits are not showing.
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life is pleasant, Death is peaceful. It's the transition that's troublesome - Isaac Aasimov
It's very simplistic I guess you could say, could do with a bit more added to it.
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Remove that orange lightning flare on her cheeks, it makes her face look like it's deformed.
The text is a bit awkward and the orange thing as said above looks like ear muffs at first glance. Other than those few changes I'm not sure as to what to add although it does feel lacking.
As Ryguy said, misses a lot of things, but nothing comes up to my mind that would make it looks better or fill it up in general. Just change that font, use some more elegant font, but not too fancy one. Maybe even bigger font would do it.
I don't like the brushes on her face.
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ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y (06-29-2011)