[CnC] Monkeys do kill

[pabloco825]

I looked at a few tuts and ended up making this. is it any good? What can I put in V2?

[Storm]

its very monotone.

low quality in allot of areas, text is bad. no flow... lighting is bad.

work on your effects, they seem to be the cause of most of your problems, clean them up a lil and blend them better.

its not bad though, keep it up!

[pabloco825]

its very monotone.

low quality in allot of areas, text is bad. no flow... lighting is bad.

work on your effects, they seem to be the cause of most of your problems, clean them up a lil and blend them better.

its not bad though, keep it up!

thanx and eh hint.. i used ur tutorial to make this

[Storm]

what one?

most of the tutorials i post arnt mine

[Keroaplt]

too much bubble spam, work on your composition
also random ass letter beside the monkey is too distracting don't add random shit around your focals because you'll ruin the focal

[Ryguy]

Don't put a shadow on your render, especially if there are lights behind it.

[Obscene]

Don't put a shadow on your render, especially if there are lights behind it.

This^

and, i would remove the random Chinese symbol there, it looks way out of place.

you should also work on lighting effects, the right side looks way to dark, IMO.

[Assassin Creed]

nice. nice.