My 2nd attempt at poetry "You and I"

[Moto]

Can we stay up and watch the stars?
Can we imagine a life better than ours?
When I'm with you, butterflies race throughout me
When I'm with you I don't care if people see me
Baby, cause it doesn't matter if I'm insecure
I don't want to be in anyone's arms but yours
You are the one that is meant for me
Baby, do you think we were meant to be?
We could be doing anything, and I enjoy it
I love you, but I'm afraid to say it
Honey, do you accept me for who I am?
I'm falling apart like the night before an exam
Im sitting here thinking about the choices we've made
Baby, let's just let it go, let's stop being afraid
We are so perfect, we were made to be
We go together like one two three...

- Ryan

@Liz

[cgallagher21]

@Moto This is actually quite good well better then what i can do

[Moto]

@Moto This is actually quite good well better then what i can do

Thanks

@Liz critique me?