One Shot

[Mr.Seyeko]

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[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

Pretty nice. Cool blending and all. But also, looks too much like your last one. Also, how do you make the render look so cartoonish?

[Keroaplt]

Needs moar topazz

[Mr.Seyeko]

Needs moar topazz

Well the pattern i used in the background was low quality cuz i had to stretch it out some so i used just a lil bit of topaz
and i missed the spot on the shirt fml

but srsly please CNC more then that.. im tryn to work hard on this new style call it my own,.

[Keroaplt]

The background is alright but the render is way too topazzed

You've got to clean your shit up this is really messy there's various lines going in an out of there ruining the flow if you added the lines in a way to add to the tag it wouldn't be so bad
You need better focal definition because right now I'm look at the clipping mask on the left I'm looking at the text I'm looking at the bright lights but I'm not looking at the render
Work with less overly dramatic stuff and make your render stand out more you're hiding it under so much clutter it's not as noticeable
If you're gonna use clipping masks then mask the right places in this case you chose the guys shirt but dice you put that right next to the guy it just looks weird IMO you should have taken another part of the tag I suggest when doing that that you hide the render apply image and then clipping mask it to your shape because otherwise the reder is gonna show up in there and just look weird
Depth.....
You have like three angles of perspective going on threshers is looking directly straight the text is kind of to the side
Then the stuff behind the text is going in another direction If you looks right now straight ahead at something or someone in relation to te background there is one perspective that you're looking at everything not 20
The lights are okay but the way that you just added them in there without making adjustments to the rest of the tag is just.no.
the renders lighting is totally off Something I always do to my renders is make adjustments
Add a couple clipping masks to your render add some stuff to make it fit
Usually I change the brightness contras colors and the lighting it came with
For this you should have added some purple an some orange to him and darkended
His other side along with the inside of his arm a little under his neck and the right side of his face

Also remove those borders they don't add anything to this specific tag sometimes they kinda make it look fonised when you don't know what else to do but that's not the case here

[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

Supahh big CnC is supahh big.

[Mr.Seyeko]

Fuck yeah! thats what i like to see!

thx Kero so much, this gonna help me, imma make this style BOSS!
because of you

[Paradox]

Pretty nice. Cool blending and all. But also, looks too much like your last one. Also, how do you make the render look so cartoonish?

Because its topazzed the living BLACK OUT OF DAT NIGGA D :


DUDE TRY TO MAKE A TAG WITHOUT TOPAZING PLEASE...

[Scrcrw]

why must you insist on using topaz

[iTzSeyeko.]

Original Render

[IMG]https://i784.photobucke*****m/albums/yy121/SeYeKo-/FashRender.png[/IMG]

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

Original Render

[IMG]https://i784.photobucke*****m/albums/yy121/SeYeKo-/FashRender.png[/IMG]

TOPAZZED TO SHIT.

[Scrcrw]

Original Render

[IMG]https://i784.photobucke*****m/albums/yy121/SeYeKo-/FashRender.png[/IMG]

yeah it's hdr
hdr =/= topaz whore

[iTzSeyeko.]

Yeah i didnt do it to the render lol

[Paradox]

this render was already topazzed
then you topazzed it again..

[Scrcrw]

this render was already topazzed
then you topazzed it again..

render wasn't topazed
hdr photo
said that