Pretty good, better than your old stuff. Not sure about text though. I think it would be better without.
Haven't done 'shops in a while...
That's pretty cool, like the flaming bottle a lot. =o
I agree w/ Doc though, it would've been better without the text or a different font.
In the end, it's not going to matter how many breaths you took, but how many moments took your breath away.
-Shing Xiong