GoldenEagle (08-29-2012),nali123321 (04-13-2012)
The night sky stretches above me, the colors forming its own blend.
Moonlight caresses my cheek, the stars seeming to never end.
The breeze blows softly, bringing magic to this place.
As I lay my head, I hope to see nothing but your face.
Your hand so strongly holding mine, never to let go it seems.
Your love so strong I feel it in every fiber, but only in my dreams.
How I remember those sweet short moments, the dream I spent with you.
Alas, Morning rises, time is up, we must part. Adieu.
A few hours, seem like just seconds, to me, much too few
At least I know you will haunt my daydreams too..
Last edited by Liz; 04-12-2012 at 11:04 PM.
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GoldenEagle (08-29-2012),nali123321 (04-13-2012)
Nice I liked this alot
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Thank you.
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Very nice, took me a while to understand though [ I'm not that smart =_+ ] .
Liz , I didn't know you did poetry
Your pretty good at it, Is it ok if I show this to my teacher?
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Reflex- (04-14-2012)
Its pretty interesting.
Did you, or did you not notice that this section (both literally and figuratively) belongs to Liz?
Also, I think she wouldn't mind you would show it to your teacher as in 'look what I found on the internet!', just don't claim it's your work
OT:
What a 'powerful' poem (unsure if that's correct English, hope you get what I mean)
Quite a shame that there are so few people showing interest though
What i write is for me, and those I choose to share it with. Not for other people to try and spread it for me. So no. /Done. Stay OT or get banned.
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Fantastic work, paints an effectively vivid picture with each stanza, the first segment starts by showing you what the setting is going to be like, while not using any filler to throw in before getting right down to the main idea behind the poem in the first place, with an offset beat with each line, making it more mysterious, yet obviously visible. I'd love to see more of your work, this isn't mediocre pointless rap like what the majority posts, and I like it. Thought through quite well.
Very well written. Nice job @Liz (: I love the concept of dreams.