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    This is indeed quite fascinating to look at. You should've made the light wider, but keep the intensity as it is IMO. Work more on the liquid contours and details, especially on sharpness, everything looks blurry. The perspectives of the glass and the wood don't match for me either, it looks as if the glass is floating above the table. It's still very good though. I also find it quite hard to believe this is your first C4D project, unless you read like 200 tutorials in a row and you have photographic memory.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Black Eyed Peas View Post
    This is indeed quite fascinating to look at. You should've made the light wider, but keep the intensity as it is IMO. Work more on the liquid contours and details, especially on sharpness, everything looks blurry. The perspectives of the glass and the wood don't match for me either, it looks as if the glass is floating above the table. It's still very good though. I also find it quite hard to believe this is your first C4D project, unless you read like 200 tutorials in a row and you have photographic memory.
    I've been learning for a week, but I never actually made anything.

    The glass is very slightly above the table because when it was on the table it turned the bottom of the glass black.
    The light is kind of messed up because I didn't really know what I was doing...

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