Funny thing

[Hexicidal]

I got tired and sick of tutorials so i was playing and press every thing i knew from the tutorials and got a really good creation




I think you people won't like it

[[MPGH]Doc]

I'm not sure what tutorial you were looking at but none of them lead to something like that. Can you link some what tutorial you were looking at?

[Cynic]

I'm pretty sure that isn't a 'good' creation ...

[Black Eyed Peas]

I'm pretty sure that isn't a 'good' creation ...

I'm sure you didn't have high standards when you were a beginner, either.
Anyways, seems like you haven't taken much from the advices I gave you; don't put text untill you can make really, really good tags.
The effects are absolutely off and weird. They don't go well together.
The lightning is terrible, too. Just read some tutorials before you proceed to new work.