zomg new

[Metro]

ok, whatever you say. dont use my criticism to make yourself a better artist.

[Empire]

ok then, its a fail because: the render is covered and distorted,pixelized and oversharpened, the background fails because it has no flow and is oversharpened completley ruining any c4d work you did and the text stands out like a sore thumb drawing the eye away from the "render" and making a already bad sig worse.
happy?

way too much, its not THAT bad whew*

anyway i like the second Sakura sig you got although i hate Sakura, so i give the first a 6/10 and second 8/10