This is a still image from a 'music video' that i'm doing, the two white lines are audio spectrum's & there is a continuous fog moving in the background
https://soundcloud.com/djtrafford
This is a still image from a 'music video' that i'm doing, the two white lines are audio spectrum's & there is a continuous fog moving in the background
https://soundcloud.com/djtrafford
I'm honestly not a big fan of it. The golden text color somehow doesnt match with me. maybe colder colors somehow could do the trick IMO.
In general its good.
Another personal hint is that you could remove top line and lower a bit more the bottom one. and push it a bit to the right. I think it could be cooler that way.
Again this is my opinion.
HalfBajan (11-17-2013)
I like it,except the D seems to be angled (even tho it's not! D: )
I like the clean design.
Last edited by IV2B; 11-17-2013 at 09:51 AM.
HalfBajan (11-17-2013)
It's not golden text, it's a luma matte layer meaning that the text is pretty much a cutout from the layer above ( in this case it's the branch), also the lines are at those positions because they are Audio spectrums, lowering the top one would overlap the text in the video.
I had to stare at the d for a solid minute to see what you meant O.o &I see what you mean... Pretty weird :O
Thanks though
About the text, you got the point, the golden/yellowish look doesnt suit it well.
About the audio spectrums, I wrote bottom not top, meaning, you delete top one, and lower bottom one, while pushing this one to the right.
THats what I meant
Anyway post here the progress and the video, when finished.
HalfBajan (11-17-2013)
The only thing noticeably wrong with it is the text. I don't mean to nitpick, it's just a little hard too see is all, doesn't stand out well enough from the dark background.
Very clean and generally nice overall.
8/10
HalfBajan (11-19-2013)