Much better man. The lighting is actually good in this one. I think the second one would look good if the scanlines weren't on the render.
Scan lines or without you choose, these are just to redeem from my imbarassing Assassins creed pic i recently made lol, hopes it kewl, don't spam the thread lol........"Songkipark"
Looks stupid.
An Assassin's Creed render don't fit well in that background.
Brush it with grunge.
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Nice work... u r making progress lol.. 7.5/10
You'll get better, keep trying.. 7/10.
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LOL! I wont spam this. But scan lines look shitty, FYI. If you dont do grunge brushes, try some textures on overlay, should help. Try some adjustment layers on overlay too. :3
v1 - nice work you are getting better & better!
v2-scanlines :3
Nice work 7.5/10
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Dude v2 was just v1 but just scan lines =/. lol just said which one you prefer, anyway this is my best in my opinion =/.
zakurna, ur ALWAYS constantly talking shit on everyones work, your never very constructive at all.
when honestly, you have little to no room at all to talk, all i see is you dissing everyones work here and there, unless its a well respected member or a mod/admin ur a dick to everyone else, you have well earned your right as cocksucker, but maybe u shouldnt try to fit so many in your mouth. or maybe just take some advice "never go ass to mouth" it might not taste as bitter.
its HIS artwork, art is an expression, of your opinions,feelings,ideas. let people express what they wish how they wish to do it, if someone asks for feedback, try and be positive, give helpful tips, since your such a photoshop god the way you dis everyones work.
now on to topic.
i prefer the scanlines 1 over the other, but thats just me. good work.
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