I made this for a contest elsewhere, the theme was "Sexy". Voting for the contest will be happening today so, I don't know what place I will take.
This took me approximately 13 hours within 2 days.
I would like CnC, keep everything else to a bare minimum.
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I like the way you approached the design; simple on the eyes yet full of detail. Well rendered and the tattoos are a very nice touch and well executed. Personally not a fan of how the legs cut off, given, the render didn't leave much choice. Also the image used is gimmicky, well played . Overall 8.5/10.
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Elocrypt. (10-05-2014)
great job with tattoos 8/10
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Very nice concept, but the execution has room for improvement. Just little things such as the flare right below her neck is pretty poorly placed. It kind of messes with the original lighting of the render, and you should usually try to work around the natural lighting of the render. The pink spot just above her ass is much too bright as well. Try to tone it down a bit, and I think it would look much better.
The shapes in the background are pretty nice, except a few exceptions where they seem a bit too blurred, or not blurred enough.
The not so good parts about this piece, would definitely have to be the tattoos, the hair, some of the effects with brushes that you placed around the render. Some of the tattoos are decent, and as a whole the concept was spectacular. The "Invis Designs," was a really nice touch and honestly looks like it fits her body, like it's an actual tattoo. The tattoo stretching down the backside of her is horribly distorted and doesn't look like it fits her body whatsoever. I feel like it's much too big as well and takes away from the render. I'd take it out completely or erase it. Once again, the tattoo on her arm doesn't look like it fits the body, and looks pretty fake. Although the star on the lower part of the stomach looks pretty decent, the tattoo above it does not. I can't even tell what it is to be honest. Plus with all the other tattoos around it, it just feels cluttered.
The hair is quite weird in my opinion. It looks like you were trying to make some depth, but instead to me it just looks like dirt in her hair. Just feels sort of off to me. Maybe a different brush would look better, because I do like what you were going for.
The brushes above her arm, and at the bottom of the render look poorly done, rushed, and completely kill the flow of the piece. (The top ones in particular, as they're going the exact opposite way of all the vector art in the background.) The bottom of the render also ends very abruptly, and you don't have much of a choice as the original picture just cuts off the legs. But what I try to do is take a soft eraser tool and softly erase the part that is cut off. It makes it feel much smoother.
Other than a couple other small, gimmicky things it's pretty solid. If you're looking for a rating, I'd probably give it a 7 - 7.5/10.
Last edited by Deflorate.; 10-05-2014 at 10:05 PM.
Elocrypt. (10-05-2014)
Thats really nice man also hey do you have any packs i could use by chance like lense flares?
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Wow dude! Them skills!