While I'm Here - Sample

[Fucking Moron]

Well at my friends studio who is a signed artist
His name is Kyle Malzhan and u can look up his songs if u wan
This is jus a sample for now
Like my shitty editing skillz?
https://soundcloud.com/jrdrail/while-im-here-v6
@Mokou-Sama @Organized Chaos's Sheep @KillTheNoise @HalfBajan

[Pikush]

I'm sorry, but I find a lack of enthusiasm in his voice when he sings, might just be me.

[Fucking Moron]

I'm sorry, but I find a lack of enthusiasm in his voice when he sings, might just be me.

First time, I couldn't disagree doe but ya I gotta work on dat bro :P

[Pikush]

First time, I couldn't disagree doe but ya I gotta work on dat bro :P

No worries man, just work on it and you'll be a pro. Everything else seems pretty good to me.

[Logic]

I'm sorry, but I find a lack of enthusiasm in his voice when he sings, might just be me.

1+ .

[Eternity]

Pretty nice.

[Derpik]

It's not that bad

[Ryuesi]

not bad for the first time just training

[OscR]

this is fucking bullshit hahahahahaah. signed my arse. sorry, but my opinion ;p

[yung trap lord]

Like my shitty editing skillz?

No. Said it yourself. Shitty.

[bowlcut]

It sounds really bad -- the production is mediocre. Very scratchy at times.
The singer sounds like he just doesn't give a shit. Or he's tired and wants to go home.
The singing itself is too loud, too.
Did you actually make the beat, or what? Because it sounds like something you just pulled off of a random beat sample site. (I'm just saying it's WAY too generic)

Overall, pretty poor. Keep trying, though.