Small part of story I've been working on

[fcmclan]

dude its amazing!!! and i mean it im serious!

just tell me one thing

wuts the story bout?? and its boring? cuz if its boring i wont read it

[Bargin]

dude its amazing!!! and i mean it im serious!

just tell me one thing

wuts the story bout?? and its boring? cuz if its boring i wont read it

it gets more exiting like as the story goes on the main charaters(max) memories and dreams will slowly reveal what happened. (Edit) plus his past has caught up to him) The next two chapters show that im still typing them up

[BMW M5]

it gets more exiting like as the story goes on the main charaters(max) memories and dreams will slowly reveal what happened. (Edit) plus his past has caught up to him) The next two chapters show that im still typing them up

he was being a dumb ass dude he didnt even read it.. dont fall for these pricks ill read it but i might have to go so pm me the download or the link to it or something i can read later i like it but, dont make me read to much to find what happened or i wont read

[Bargin]

he was being a dumb ass dude he didnt even read it.. dont fall for these pricks ill read it but i might have to go so pm me the download or the link to it or something i can read later i like it but, dont make me read to much to find what happened or i wont read

lol ok it doesnt rly get good until the end of chapter 3 and chapter 4 most of chapter 3 in informational about the story

[BMW M5]

stop posting and type the story dammit! i gotta go soon lol type it so i can read and get off... you almsot done?

[Bargin]

stop posting and type the story dammit! i gotta go soon lol type it so i can read and get off... you almsot done?

lol alnost done with chapter 3 these 2 chapters are very long bu ill hurry how loing do you have?

[BMW M5]

not much really about 30 mins or so now cuz ppl were gonna call and parents were gonna talk on skype but they not gonna call its 11:30pm and in 30 mins be 12 am thats when i get kicked off lol

[Bargin]

ohh lol i just finished my 3rd chapter
the next one is about 2 pages long want me to post the 3rd so u can read while i write the 4th?

[scimmyboy]

not much really about 30 mins or so now cuz ppl were gonna call and parents were gonna talk on skype but they not gonna call its 11:30pm and in 30 mins be 12 am thats when i get kicked off lol

i assume u live in the PST time zone?

[BMW M5]

yes to bargin and to scimmy i live in pacific time zone idk what pst is lol but yeah pacific

[Bargin]

ok im posting it on the zstart of the thread ok their will be 2 attachments now

[BMW M5]

ima have to wait for it to get approved bad bad bad.... its gonna take forever

[scimmyboy]

yes to bargin and to scimmy i live in pacific time zone idk what pst is lol but yeah pacific

PST is pacific standard time.

[Bargin]

ok i updated it redownload it ill have to post the rest of it tomorrow guys the 4th chapter is the best part i ave to go to bed now so i hope u enjoy what ive posted so far itll probly be on around the same time i posted this one ok cya tommorrow

[BMW M5]

ok i red it so far so good, but you got alot of mistakes in there but the theme is very good. i like it man good job what grade you in? im guessing your middle school lol