death
it comes and goes
everyone knows its their
its at the tip of your noes
its so deadly and silent
now what would you say
if you lost a family member or the love of your life
although it society knocks it off by saying it happens every day
you look into the night skies and fly away
but death cant take me or you
for we are invincible
what i say now is it true
or is it based on fact and principle
but you can never avoid its grasp
you can run and try and postpone
now in this you will never be last
for now your in my mind zone
thanks man hahha godmode XD
you've really been milking this creepy dark theme lately =/
"Every gun that is made, every warship launched, every rocket fired signifies, in the final sense, a theft from those who hunger and are not fed, those who are cold and are not clothed. This world in arms is not spending money alone. It is spending the sweat of its laborers, the genius of its scientists, the hopes of its children. The cost of one modern heavy bomber is this: a modern brick school in more than 30 cities. It is two electric power plants, each serving a town of 60,000 population. It is two fine, fully equipped hospitals. It is some fifty miles of concrete pavement. We pay for a single fighter plane with a half million bushels of wheat. We pay for a single destroyer with new homes that could have housed more than 8,000 people. This is, I repeat, the best way of life to be found on the road the world has been taking. This is not a way of life at all, in any true sense. Under the cloud of threatening war, it is humanity hanging from a cross of iron."- Dwight D. Eisenhower
ahhh what you mean by milking if you want something diff tell me i will work something up for you =)
I got some bad news, you're going to die, just like everyone else, so get over it.
"We swallow greedily any lie that flatters us, but we sip only little by little at a truth we find bitter." ~ Denis Diderot
Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies! Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!Lies!
None Of this is TRUE! Now Die!
~H4xer4ever
hahaha wow pax you missed the whole point but its ok =)
No I got the point of your poem, it's just not incredibly insightful or thought provoking.
"We swallow greedily any lie that flatters us, but we sip only little by little at a truth we find bitter." ~ Denis Diderot
ok then what was the point?
death is unavoidable, people try to belittle the significants of death by saying it happens all the time. Then you begin talking about how death doesn't actually kill "you".
"We swallow greedily any lie that flatters us, but we sip only little by little at a truth we find bitter." ~ Denis Diderot
well your half right but the last part doesnt mean that try agin and think harder =)
"but death cant take me or you
for we are invincible
what i say now is it true
or is it based on fact and principle"
Its asking a question not stating a fact =)