Rap battle Final judging

Ok guys i need ya to vote on this
thread to see who was better
....
Dreamerkii (Me)
or
@Toxin

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Originally Posted by Toxin

Bitchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
This shit aint nothing but on my balls, like an itch.
Down the road you better start to hitch,
Your ears, my rhymes will enrich.

I aint a ******, so I aint scared to go first,
Watching you bleed deep as I finish this verse.
You can come at me with your worse,
No matter what I'm sending you home in a hearse.

Originally Posted by Dreamerkiid _

@Toxin
so you call yourself toxin-well i got the antidote
cuz your rhymes are child play lke a kid passin note
and your easy to control so @J Miliam pass me the remote
if this battle was a water race i ll be on a torpedo boat

Honestly toxin your just a waste of space
your useless lke a army base
you should be scared cuz i got that coup de grace
you should stop now cuz you aint winnin this race

marine corp stay on my mind
your no way near me so i guess your runnin this race blind

Originally Posted by Toxin

@Dreamerkiid _
Well goddamn, shouldn't of took you for granted
You're brain dead, might want to get that transplanted.
When this battles over with my ears will be disenchanted,
And you might wanna check your balls, must of been implanted.

If you think I'm getting hit by the shit you say,
Then step back, and admire, cause its all on display.
Don't worry, I'll step up I'll meet you halfway.
After this @FUKO is gonna want a slow motion instant replay.

Waste of fucking space?
Niggah you're a fucking fucking disgrace.
Get a napkin clean the shit off your face.
My heads the motherfucking knowledge base.

Water? This is race for mother fucking rats,
You know what they say, if you win, you're still a rat.
Could top you with my heart monitor going flat.
Come on cut the chit chat, get out of here, there aint no dealing with this cat.

Originally Posted by Dreamerkiid _

@Toxin

your cute cuz you think you got some potenial
Between me you we got a big differential
Effing with me you better stay pack with your essential
So go off runnin to your house- oops I meant apt -nonresidential

In this battle i know i got the better flow
cuz i am a broken down sink - I always overflow
And I'm something you might not want to visit- skid row
In those places they shoot you from head to toe
they ll take your head off and you ll be lke-where my body go?

and you think im a fuckin disgrace
haha you must be stuck in your imaginary place
and your brain must be in dead space
im a future marine so i move in my own military pace

Originally Posted by Toxin

Welcome to the kingdom, I own.
On your knees, I'm leanin while getting blown.
Scrub step away from my throne,
Cause there is no way I'm getting beat my some goddamn unknown.

And get out of here with that marine shit,
It'll look like nothing after this skit,
Everyone better duck, cause everyones getting hit.
I've been going easy, I'll admit.

I'm slinging words like bullets left and right,
Could beat your ass all night,
Now think about this before you write,
I'm a dog with no bark, and all bite.

Fucking with a piece of shit, nothing.
While you're choking on my ding-a-ling
Don't worry, I'll take you under my wing,
You'll be my puppet without strings,
Besides, I'm your father from your mom's one night fling.

(7am, just woke up hung over. Give myself an A+)

Originally Posted by Dreamerkiid _

@Toxin

I torn down your kingdom and made it into my Maroc
In here your a mouse and im a blood thristy Hawk
Now its time to back the game that you talk
before i slap and eye out you ll need bi focal to see me walk

In this battle i know i excede
my rhymes coming down lke a stampede
Right now im sittin bakk rollin up this pineapple weed
so dont eff with me
Before i shoot you up and make you lke christopher reed
and evict you out your home "like bitch i got the deed"

And if you a dog im bout to put you down
turn your smiles into frowns
put my foot on ya chest sayin where my crown
then leave you un concious and come bakk around
help you up on your two feet just to stomp you bakk to the ground
owwwe!!

I know this is painful
but your rhymes are shameful
and a lil distatseful
and my punchline are fatal
and im so graceful
cant you see im one of gods angel
after this your goin to need some spatial
and im never gonna stop shoutin out the corp cuz im so FOREVER FAITHFUL

Ps And im sorry if i made you cry
Just always rememeber Semper Fi Or Die

me

Originally Posted by hydra706

me

lmao if you say so

Toxin becuase shes sexy

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toxin because he kept 4 lines per verse, you were 2/3/4/5.

so yah. you stupid.

Originally Posted by **********

Toxin becuase shes sexy .

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Originally Posted by **********

Toxin becuase shes sexy

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Originally Posted by Wolf

toxin because he kept 4 lines per verse, you were 2/3/4/5.

so yah. you stupid.

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then vote guys the poll is up there
and why should that matter

Originally Posted by Dreamerkiid _

then vote guys the poll is up there
and why should that matter

It shows flow? A sense of rhythm?

And nah toxin didn't beat him by that much.