Fire Effect Text

[[MPGH]Jim Morrison]

Hello everyone, I've been working on these for a while now in Photoshop CS6, please tell me what you think. The first picture is one I made for my self and the second one is one I made for a friend of mine.

[[MPGH]Hugo Boss]

The word's a bit unclear

[[MPGH]Jim Morrison]

The word's a bit unclear

I'm going to assume you mean the first photo, and is it a specific part of it or the entire text?

[[MPGH]Hugo Boss]

I'm going to assume you mean the first photo, and is it a specific part of it or the entire text?

Yeah i mean't the first one, and it was just hard to read, I think there was too much fire

[[MPGH]Jim Morrison]

Yeah i mean't the first one, and it was just hard to read, I think there was too much fire

Thanks for the feedback, how does the second one look?

[St1pe]

Very hard to read for the first 1 and the 2nd one is alright I guess, maybe make a char effect somewhere in the fire to make it look better, and darker would be better.

[[MPGH]Hugo Boss]

Thanks for the feedback, how does the second one look?

I'm not really that familiar with GFX design stuff, but I don't know why the second one looks a bit slanted to me

[[MPGH]Jim Morrison]

Thanks for all the feedback I did make another fire text of the same text, but with slightly decreased opacity but I feel it doesn't look as good.

[St1pe]

Thanks for all the feedback I did make another fire text of the same text, but with slightly decreased opacity but I feel it doesn't look as good.

Try exactly what I said and show me the results, I am sure it will look pretty nice depending on how you do it, when I did it it looked great.

[[MPGH]Jim Morrison]

Try exactly what I said and show me the results, I am sure it will look pretty nice depending on how you do it, when I did it it looked great.

What exactly do you mean by a, "char effect," I never heard of that term before.

[chaslav]

It should look like this.

[St1pe]

What exactly do you mean by a, "char effect," I never heard of that term before.

You know when you have a fire place once the wood is almost done burning, it has a black char on it, and some grey, try adding some of that.

[[MPGH]Jim Morrison]

You know when you have a fire place once the wood is almost done burning, it has a black char on it, and some grey, try adding some of that.

Hmm, when I work on the project again I'll try that.