Fusion Betrayal Collab

[SpaWn]

Fusion Betrayal Collab piece.

This was for a challenge against D.I.K

Made by me and Lostcausejr

Comment and Criticism appreciated.

[PhotoNoobster]

Okay, the other faded snake in back is sorta annyoing.

Text fits in color/blending. The font could be slightly tweaked, and the lower text like motion blur (Like Fusion --BLUR HERE--
--Betrayal--)

Nothing else i can think of. 8.7/10

[SpaWn]

Okay, the other faded snake in back is sorta annyoing.

Text fits in color/blending. The font could be slightly tweaked, and the lower text like motion blur (Like Fusion --BLUR HERE--
--Betrayal--)

Nothing else i can think of. 8.7/10

Ok thanks for the CnC
The 'other' Faded snake?

[PhotoNoobster]

Maybe it's my imagination but there seems to be another snake mouth left-diagonal from his head

[SpaWn]

Maybe it's my imagination but there seems to be another snake mouth left-diagonal from his head

Yeah i just noticed that, and nah its just the way it's turned out.

[PhotoNoobster]

oh and 1 more thing u have this outward flow, which is nice IMO, but then on the left u have this inward darkness, it takes away from flow

[SpaWn]

oh and 1 more thing u have this outward flow, which is nice IMO, but then on the left u have this inward darkness, it takes away from flow

Yeah, true. It was meant to be like that on the left, comming outwards, but then at the same time the general flow was meant to be the way the snakes body was going, so had to mix and match. Didn't generally work.

[moosicgawd]

Pretty busy.
not too bad though.
Im kinda busy so i dont have to give a good crit
8/10

[SpaWn]

Pretty busy.
not too bad though.
Im kinda busy so i dont have to give a good crit
8/10

Ahh fair enough, cheers for the high rate though mate.

[kublkun]

7.5/10 its good i like it