my crossfire home work XD

i like it, but it still needs a little work.. you should also outline the gun so it looks more clearer

umm its right i do it next 2 hours

You should add some shading, they look sort of flat. Also maybe use a ruler along straight edges? Attention to detail adds a lot =)

:S good idea i will

thank you .

pretty cool, you should use a rule or something to get darker and straighter lines to define the shape... but overall cool stuff

If i were you id use some copy paper.

Looks nice, maybe a bit unfinished but nice.
I'd suggest going over the lines with a detailing pen / fine point sharpie to give them more of a finished feel.
Any time that I doodle, I end up going over the finished product with a sharpie so that I can finish and correct lines, even though it usually makes the lines wider and pretty bulky -.-

I LIKE THE PART WHERE YOU SPELLED AK-47 KNIF
IT WAS SO EPIC.

Looks nice :-) But why would you get homeworks like this? i dont get it.