Song I wrote. need feedback

[Oneirish]

Lol thanks. And I like dispatch, I have some stuff from them.

No I'm not in a band, I used to play with this one guy, but he moved somewhere, but ya.

[coledes1996]

oh yes wonderful

[gbitz]

Sounds just a little out of tune. My dad knows how to play acoustic, so I know how it should sound tuned, and it would sound good. Just get in a sound proof room (ie your closet) and record it, use audio software to make it clean.

But it was very good. At least someone has a talent they can show off around here.

[Obama]

Its out of tune very good though.

[Oneirish]

It's actually not out of tune, it's just warped so it makes a retarded ding noise, and I didn't want to play it on low notes, so I put the capo on 7th. And seemliss, I don't have any recording software and shit, just a mic and some program.

[Zen]

my pet cat could do better then that on cat nip and vicodin.

[Oneirish]

I don't have a cat :/

[Zen]

i do! yay!!!!

[Zhellbound]

It sounds like city n colour. Howd you record it?

[Iwin]

Its sounds pretty good.

ive never played the guitar ever though.

[Zen]

iwin who was that directed to?

[BPK]

Nevermind.

Well, it's horribly out of tune, but I like the feel of the song.

Being the musically adept me, I cringed like hell at the end.

[Iwin]

iwin who was that directed to?

OneIrish lol

[Zen]

por que jorge?

[Oneirish]

Nevermind.

Well, it's horribly out of tune, but I like the feel of the song.

Being the musically adept me, I cringed like hell at the end.

If you read my other post, it's not out of tune. It's warped so it makes a weird noise. because it sounds like shit on lower frets, so I put the capo on 7th...