KAMEHAMEHA!!

The grunge is really random... Dont really fit in too welk with the blast

And the blast is blocking the render... You should have added more stuff on the blast(in my opinion)

And the lighting is only on the blast... (i didnt like it)

But far better than the other one

But still... 6/10

it might just be me on this pc but its really blurry
bg dont really go with it maybe try some stocks
text is ok 5.7/10

@OO7: The blast is supposed to block the render. Its a kamehameha, it doesn't come from the back. >.>
And the lighting is only on the blast because thats how the render looked to me, there was only lighting on the render in the front.
Anyways, thanks, i guess.

@Lost: eww, Stocks. I used to use them, hated them.
Yeah, Its kinda blurry. Don't know why it did that, it seemed fine in the render. O.o

well it good to know how to use stocks and without you should look at some tut after all you needum

The grunge effect blends really well with the render, but the light is way too off tracking, just looks like a random ass lens flare just stuck there and is putting the whole piece off, imo some of the render needs to be brought back to original colours, and the lighting needs to be sorted out.

here some advice kira.

*NEVER use brushes as a background. Its not a good habit to have.*

i love this 1 more then any you have made before 10/10 i would give advice but i cant even think of any to give gj

@Anecdote: The render is the same color, except for the small 22% gradient maps.

@Faux: I've always used Brushes as BG's. I used stocks once, hate them.

WTF why's it blurry?

ps.kira i dont hate you even though you most likely think i do i do say bad shit about u but thts only if im mad plz dont hate me

Kira. I challenge you to make a signature without c4d's and brushes. Do you think you can do it?