Gaar (06-06-2016)
THIS IS NOT A SALE THREAD, NEED CRITIQUES SO THAT I CAN MAKE CHANGES.
Last edited by PlainPat; 06-05-2016 at 09:58 PM.
Gaar (06-06-2016)
Where you have your name at the top of the page, it isn't good looking. It catches the eye by looking like Japanese, not what you were going for.
Remove all Japanese text, we use English here.
The "circle's" on the upper part of the design do not look like proper circles more like ovals, also it should be opaque.
The 3 buttons on the bottom of the thread look pretty bad, don't put text over the logo. If anything out it at the top or bottom of it. And the add skype button looks stretched and not good quality. Also that's pretty pointless unless your are cutting that peice out so its clickable.
Other then what I stated it looks alright, looking forward to your future designs
What Gaar said.
Also you don't "satisfy" someone else's order, you do their orders.
Space (06-06-2016)
I don't like the font, maybe try another one?
Last edited by PlainPat; 06-06-2016 at 04:27 PM.
Gaar (06-06-2016)