guitarist

[jadedfrog]

[IMG]https://i28.photobucke*****m/albums/c224/Blah1233/Guitarist.png[/IMG]

all presets, c&c

[August2007]

+'s

• Nice background effects.
• Good flow.
• Decent lighting.

-'s

• Too monotone.
• Lighting can be fixed.
• Too sharp.
• Too much blank space.

Overall: It's a nice piece, but it could be done alot better.

[jadedfrog]

Thank you for your honest opinion and very well done critique, I can definetly tell your no beginner. So thanks you.

[FluffyStuff]

+'s

• Nice background effects.
• Good flow.
• Decent lighting.

-'s

• Too monotone.
• Lighting can be fixed.
• Too sharp.
• Too much blank space.

Overall: It's a nice piece, but it could be done alot better.

I really love your English, finally somebody with good grammar.

The picture is nice but i think the text font doesnt quite fit with the picture.

[tednugent]

I really love your English, finally somebody with good grammar.

The picture is nice but i think the text font doesnt quite fit with the picture.

What's wrong with my grammar?

T.T

[Gourav2122]

I really love your English, finally somebody with good grammar.

The picture is nice but i think the text font doesn't quite fit with the picture.

aye! i has the best gramer here
TEXT is ok but it sort of runs into the dude like replace the sest

[August2007]

What's wrong with my grammar?

T.T

Hmmmm... it's not exactly anything wrong with your grammar, it's the fact I gave jadedfrog what he wanted. A proper critique.

aye! i has the best gramer here
TEXT is ok but it sort of runs into the dude like replace the sest

First; What the hell do you know? You don't even have photoshop.
Second; Your grammar is really bad. My dog can do better.

PS: Admins and Mod's please do not rage. This isn't a personal attack or flame, merely a point of view.

[Gourav2122]

Hmmmm... it's not exactly anything wrong with your grammar it's the fact I gave jadedfrog what he wanted. A proper critique.



First; What the hell do you know? You don't even have photoshop.
Second; Your grammar is really bad. My dog can do better.

PS: Admins and Mod's please do not rage. This isn't a personal attack or flame, merely a point of view.

well yea read this this

From what I have seen on these forums, Gourav has the best constructed sentances of all members.

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Ps> every rips on me belive me actly mods and super basters say the same shit.

[jadedfrog]

Thanks for the comments on it.. Assholes

[Mike Green Day]

Yeah it is a bit sharp...And it can be lighted a little better.