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    Lightbulb Water Kid

    Just wanted some of your opinions on how this looks, whether or not you like it and how to improve on it, hopefully (This is the third time Iv'e said this) I can actually get back to posting edits a bit more frequently than once every 1 month.
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    The effects coming from the boy's arm needs serious blending work. Need to clean up the parts where you can still see the stock rather than the sky in the background shining through the water droplets.

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    Oh crap yeah, didn't realize that while editing thanks for pointing em out.

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    Yeah it looks very clear that he's been photoshopped in, and the transition of arm to water should be more gradual instead of making him look like an amputee lol

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    The water coming from his arm isn't done very will because I can see you copy pasted the water.

    Maybe the water is like that, but at the end of the water, it looks like you cut it off too. Pretty sure water isn't that straight

    Also the legs in the water. When the leg enters the water, that looks copy paste. Maybe also add a little reflection.

    Why is the boy black and white when you can see its not dark outside?

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    woah that edit is really cool

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    Quote Originally Posted by Allura View Post
    The water coming from his arm isn't done very will because I can see you copy pasted the water.

    Maybe the water is like that, but at the end of the water, it looks like you cut it off too. Pretty sure water isn't that straight

    Also the legs in the water. When the leg enters the water, that looks copy paste. Maybe also add a little reflection.

    Why is the boy black and white when you can see its not dark outside?

    Yeah I've noticed these mistakes, the kid is black and white because I decided I wanted him to be, the reason he looks copy and pasted in is because of how the selection was made, making it look like I just placed him there, thanks for the cnc though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nervozs View Post
    Yeah I've noticed these mistakes, the kid is black and white because I decided I wanted him to be, the reason he looks copy and pasted in is because of how the selection was made, making it look like I just placed him there, thanks for the cnc though.
    Hopefully you fix all those up and it'll look epic
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    Quote Originally Posted by Allura View Post
    Hopefully you fix all those up and it'll look epic
    Won't be able to fix these up soon since I'm going to Paris for 3 days, but yeah hopefully I will fix it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nervozs View Post
    Won't be able to fix these up soon since I'm going to Paris for 3 days, but yeah hopefully I will fix it.
    Fix it when ever. Keep us updated!
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    It's good but still need more practice.

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