Crossfire montage -- MPGH application

[Lonesome Cowboy]

So, this is my PL application.
Please tell me, what is your opinion!

[Wolf]

Intro, shorten it. We don't take 30 seconds to read about 1 line of words.

Will edit more shit in.

Put transitions between kills + don't keep it in one spot for so long, gets tiring watching the same thing over and over.

@ 2.27 why zoom in so fast, we're watching nothing for a bit. Then don't include the "THANK YOU" bit after it.

With the thank-you bit, why did you freeze the stuff going on in the background while it faded? Should have things going on 24/7 and never a split second of watching nothing. Happened again at 2.45 again at 2.55

Don't put WOW in for kills which weren't even that good.

@3.39 you included yourself spawning, should literally only include kills unless in the middle of a streak.

@4.06, you included running around knifing for no reason.

Don't include getting kicked, it's useless unless it at the VERY end, ie. No exit thing saying Thanks for watching.

Don't even include thanks for watching, it's an overused cliché.

Overall, Stick with the footage, mix it up ALLOT more, put some snazzy edits in, make it shorter, don't include the stupid text boxes in the middle, make transitions more smoother.

[Lonesome Cowboy]

You can skip it!

Freedom of youtube!

[Wolf]

You can skip it!

Freedom of youtube!

But what happens if I don't want to skip it?

Stop thinking up excuses, and make a new video using the CONSTRUCTIVE criticism I posted, would you rather I just said "It's Shit."?

[doggyrpg]

I don't like the text. The text lasts for too long, other than that, it's fine.

[Lonesome Cowboy]

But what happens if I don't want to skip it?

Stop thinking up excuses, and make a new video using the CONSTRUCTIVE criticism I posted, would you rather I just said "It's Shit."?

Alright alright. It was like this, because then the lines would come exactly when they have to, and there is no "lag" in them.
Is that a fair enough excuse?

[Wolf]

Alright alright. It was like this, because then the lines would come exactly when they have to, and there is no "lag" in them.
Is that a fair enough excuse?

Quote my first post w/ stuph.

[DawgiiStylz]

Wolf pretty much said all
The music is bad tho

[Wolf]

Wolf pretty much said all
The music is bad tho

Didn't include music because it's about editting and tbh, music isn't part of that.

It seem's like a rushed job.

[elias1899]

with what programm do u record and how do u make that the video has such a good quality....xD

[elias1899]

Intro, shorten it. We don't take 30 seconds to read about 1 line of words.

Will edit more shit in.

Put transitions between kills + don't keep it in one spot for so long, gets tiring watching the same thing over and over.

@ 2.27 why zoom in so fast, we're watching nothing for a bit. Then don't include the "THANK YOU" bit after it.

With the thank-you bit, why did you freeze the stuff going on in the background while it faded? Should have things going on 24/7 and never a split second of watching nothing. Happened again at 2.45 again at 2.55

Don't put WOW in for kills which weren't even that good.

@3.39 you included yourself spawning, should literally only include kills unless in the middle of a streak.

@4.06, you included running around knifing for no reason.

Don't include getting kicked, it's useless unless it at the VERY end, ie. No exit thing saying Thanks for watching.

Don't even include thanks for watching, it's an overused cliché.

Overall, Stick with the footage, mix it up ALLOT more, put some snazzy edits in, make it shorter, don't include the stupid text boxes in the middle, make transitions more smoother.

and the music is sick!

[Lonesome Cowboy]

Intro, shorten it. We don't take 30 seconds to read about 1 line of words.

Will edit more shit in.

Put transitions between kills + don't keep it in one spot for so long, gets tiring watching the same thing over and over.

But it's more tiring if you jump back to the same spot after every 2 kill.


@ 2.27 why zoom in so fast, we're watching nothing for a bit. Then don't include the "THANK YOU" bit after it.

This is an Ego thing, lol

With the thank-you bit, why did you freeze the stuff going on in the background while it faded? Should have things going on 24/7 and never a split second of watching nothing. Happened again at 2.45 again at 2.55

I think it's cool freezing it

Don't put WOW in for kills which weren't even that good.

Ok...

@3.39 you included yourself spawning, should literally only include kills unless in the middle of a streak.

The point was that I did the kill soon after respawn

@4.06, you included running around knifing for no reason.

The point was Mission Sucess.

Don't include getting kicked, it's useless unless it at the VERY end, ie. No exit thing saying Thanks for watching.

Ok.

Don't even include thanks for watching, it's an overused cliché.
I made it for the effect, not for the text. Remember, this is for an application, where I show my editing skills!

Overall, Stick with the footage, mix it up ALLOT more, put some snazzy edits in, make it shorter, don't include the stupid text boxes in the middle, make transitions more smoother. [/QUOTE]

Thank you, quite a review.
I'll reconsider my video, edit some things.
But first, I want to hear other opinions.


The music sucks, I know.
And yes it IS a rused job, I made it in 1-2 hours.

[TheChickenPewp]

>>was not impressed, xm8 takes no fuckin skill. I wanna see you go 40-0 with k1a or p90, or get fuckin kills with a m700.

[Lonesome Cowboy]

Intro, shorten it. We don't take 30 seconds to read about 1 line of words.

Will edit more shit in.

Put transitions between kills + don't keep it in one spot for so long, gets tiring watching the same thing over and over.

But it's more tiring if you jump back to the same spot after every 2 kill.


@ 2.27 why zoom in so fast, we're watching nothing for a bit. Then don't include the "THANK YOU" bit after it.

This is an Ego thing, lol

With the thank-you bit, why did you freeze the stuff going on in the background while it faded? Should have things going on 24/7 and never a split second of watching nothing. Happened again at 2.45 again at 2.55

I think it's cool freezing it

Don't put WOW in for kills which weren't even that good.

Ok...

@3.39 you included yourself spawning, should literally only include kills unless in the middle of a streak.

The point was that I did the kill soon after respawn

@4.06, you included running around knifing for no reason.

The point was Mission Sucess.

Don't include getting kicked, it's useless unless it at the VERY end, ie. No exit thing saying Thanks for watching.

Ok.

Don't even include thanks for watching, it's an overused cliché.
I made it for the effect, not for the text. Remember, this is for an application, where I show my editing skills!

Overall, Stick with the footage, mix it up ALLOT more, put some snazzy edits in, make it shorter, don't include the stupid text boxes in the middle, make transitions more smoother.

Thank you, quite a review.
I'll reconsider my video, edit some things.
But first, I want to hear other opinions.


The music sucks, I know.
And yes it IS a rused job, I made it in 1-2 hours.[/QUOTE]

@ChickenPewp This wasn't for weapon illustration.
This was made to show my skills on Video Editing.

[Wolf]

Thank you, quite a review.
I'll reconsider my video, edit some things.
But first, I want to hear other opinions.


The music sucks, I know.
And yes it IS a rused job, I made it in 1-2 hours.

@ChickenPewp This wasn't for weapon illustration.
This was made to show my skills on Video Editing.[/QUOTE]

When you said about the editting skills and not text, you should have put more editting in.