Its nice if you add more words. Its like cut-cut-cut.
you rise, you fall.
you stumble, you crawl.
you bleed, you cry.
you smile, you lie.
i hurt, i scream.
you hope, i dream.
i kiss defeat,
you just repeat.
i play my song
and you are wrong.
i am a star,
not what you are.
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Its nice if you add more words. Its like cut-cut-cut.
not bad dont like the ending
me neither, cudnt think of anything else.
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me too i liked it at the start with the rhythm back an forward but it was a awkward transition in the end
Don't be so harsh, it is pretty good, and the ending it's not that bad!
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