my friend vs me

haha paul you suck but not half bad man

Good fucking lord.

Never in my life, ever, have I seen worse grammar.

It's just as bad as a kid with down syndrome head-butting the keyboard.

ok dude no im srry im not gonna flame or troll but to tell you the truth its not good at all way too short and well no rythm, no flow you talked about jizz too much and since when does sucker rhyme with hooker like wtf im srry but uhm no keep trying write it longer make sure it has flow or idk just dont at all dont let this affect ur confidence on writing shit cuz im not trying to tell you u suck cuz well u do but im not trying to tell you that im trying to tell you that you and paul or whatever need to really read ur own rhymes like do you just write it down and not even check if it rhymes cuz i think thats what you do like im expecting you to try to rhyme balls with testicles next time cuz idk this kinda sucks but well ive been typing too much so yeah try again

lol.wtf was that
i dont rap anyway
just tried it
I know he sucks

DUDE of course yours is better , your friend paul sounds like a retard on a good day.

You both fucking suck. Go off yourselves.

And Leonard you look like Jeffrey Star. Go kill yourself fag.