Halo

[Trianglez]

V2

CnC

[Ryan]

The right and left sides don't match with each other.
The white splatter in the bottom left looks bad, add a clipping mask to it maybe.
Take the red on the right out, or make it the same yellow as the C4D's.
Stay away from text.
And never ever ever ever ever ever use a Master Chief render.

You've got something good going, I can see what it is you wanted this to be.
KIU.

[Kuro Tenshi]

ehm, kinda dark and blue-ish...
text invisable?

[Hyak]

splatters are bad
cant read text
colors aren't to good

try getting more flow
the size is close 2 a square which is a bad thing
colors are non fitting
the left looks like a crumbled piece of paper
to random try to keep a theme

[Trianglez]

Alright, Ill put up another v with that, thanks ryan. :P

[Parade]

The paper texture is too obvious, I can't read the text, and the lighting..eh. But I like the c4d placement. Paper texture?
7/10

[+dd.Shift]

your splatters are too big. resize your brush.

font is really bad, plus you cant even read it with the clipping mask on it. dun do text, unless you really really want your name on it for some reason. i barely ever use text

purple to orange gradient set on lighten does not look too good.

if you really wanna get better colors stop using that gradient. lol try photo filters, make your own gradients, stop using purple to orange. please. everyone does that @.@ its too boring.

texture is not that good either, remove it. it doesnt help at all.

[Trianglez]

Nobody likes the paper texture xD

I cant make any serious edits because i have like 8 applied images already

[+dd.Shift]

then make a new tag, and make it better.

you dont always have to make changes to it, you can just keep in mind what people tell you, as you make your next tag.

[Trianglez]

Thanks, Ill either just make an entire do over of this tag or just make a completely different one.

[Scrcrw]

u went overboard on adjustments
the colours and contrast look whack
v2 is better
try something new now

[Taco]

ummmm............................................. .....
imma just say this............................wtf?

[Trianglez]

Spam much? Gtfo noob.

[Ariez]

Lemme give you one big hint... I see an "R"....