Daft Punk (Not so good ): )

[~AfroNinja~]

V1:


V1(Borders):


V2:


V2(Borders):


V3:


V3(Borders:

[Da Kurlzz]

V1 with borders for /me

Too much white at the head on the right side?

aw wells. its alot better compared to mine.

[Matt]

You lied to me, you said you would stop the text ):
Anyways, it's never a good idea to use 2 focals, and they're too sharp. Also, don't get FHS (Floating Head Syndrome). You need parts of the body to make it work. The colors clash in an unsightly way too. The white stuff behind the focal is very odd, and not flowing or anything. It's just there. Another thing, purple/orange gradient maps don't always make it good. Just a tip.
KIU

[~AfroNinja~]

You lied to me, you said you would stop the text ):
Anyways, it's never a good idea to use 2 focals, and they're too sharp. Also, don't get FHS (Floating Head Syndrome). You need parts of the body to make it work. The colors clash in an unsightly way too. The white stuff behind the focal is very odd, and not flowing or anything. It's just there. Another thing, purple/orange gradient maps don't always make it good. Just a tip.
KIU

Sorry for the text/
Anyway, I actually ran out of ideas on the middle of the signature, most of the c4d wouldn't match :\
And for the head floating, didn't know that it ruined the sig, :/
And i'm still practicing about the sharp thing, just a question, do I click "Sharp Edges" once or twice? Do I click "Sharp" once or twice? Because i'm using it twice

[skizz720]

V1 with borders for /me

Too much white at the head on the right side?

aw wells. its alot better compared to mine.

I agree i like V1(borders) i think that one looks the best. Good job

[Matt]

Sorry for the text/
Anyway, I actually ran out of ideas on the middle of the signature, most of the c4d wouldn't match :\
And for the head floating, didn't know that it ruined the sig, :/
And i'm still practicing about the sharp thing, just a question, do I click "Sharp Edges" once or twice? Do I click "Sharp" once or twice? Because i'm using it twice

Once "sharp" is fine.

[SpaWn]

I like the style used on V2. Though it looks way too over sharpened, if you want an easy way just to create some depth, just apply the image blur it one or twice, then erase the parts in the foreground such as the renders, and it will just be an easy way to get some cheap depth into your piece. Then just just apply image again, sharpen it up once, erase the background, to really bring your piece out. I agree with dragon that two renders is never a good idea, and right now it looks too over cluttered with parts that aren't really necessary.
Your learning and improving at a good pace, keep going.

[BassSR]

v3 for sure.