What you did:
- Desaturated
- Overlayed entire thing in Blue
- Overlayed entire thing (except the scope) randomely with a red star brush (Default PS brush)
- Overlayed one big star on scope glass.
Better than the last one, barely.
What you probably should have done differently:
- Overlayed selectively, not the entire thing
- Use a custom brush, SPARINGLY, not SPAMINGLY.
- Don't brush the scope glass, people tend to dislike it unless you KNOW what you're doing.
4/10, IMO. Getting Better but you have a long road to walk.
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