what more?

[Mister Krister]

idk what more i can do with this? i'd love some tips or anything more i can do

[Ryguy]

Fill the negative space and add text.

[Mister Krister]

Fill the negative space and add text.

negative space? sorry i dont understand :S

[Flash]

negative space? sorry i dont understand :S

I think that he meant empty place
And yea, you should add some cool text on it ..

[Mister Krister]

I think that he meant empty place
And yea, you should add some cool text on it ..

well text is hard, so it wil be simple

better?

[Ryguy]

Better, but move the text a little bit higher. Leave Mistor on the white grungy part but Kristor on the black part.

[Mister Krister]

like this?

[Irony]

V3 iis better then V1.

[.Amnesia]

When I first look at the piece, my eyes go directly to his face. But when I take a closer look, I see that there is no focal at all.
The render you used was going to be your focal if I'm correct.
You tried to do it by adding lightning and a little bit of sharpen and blur, but it didn't execute that well.
My tip would be a better background, as this one is too negative.
Blur it in layers, so make it that layer 5 has 100% blur, layer 4 80% blur, etc etc. Then layer 1 sharpened and stuff, if you get what I mean?
Depth isn't all about blur and sharpen, you gotta look out for lightning also.
If you look at the render that you've used, you can see where the lightning should be coming from, yet, you did it wrong.
The lightning should be coming from the upper right to the middle left, but his right shoulder is very bright, and the rest isn't.
Create a new layer, fill it with black, set it to linear dodge, get a 300px soft white brush, and mess around with it. Don't over do it though
The background is kinda empty and way too negative. Go for a darker and sinister background the next time, and don't do smudge, as a smudged background won't execute properly that often.
The text is kind of distracting, as it is very pixelated.
It doesn't fit in with the rest of the signature, and it's in the wrong place.
Try to go for a textless version ( a ''tag'' ), or look up some tutorials about how to make your text perfect.
And last but not least, don't do B&W, as it often ruins your piece.

I hope that that was enough for you.

[Ryguy]

^^ the text is all messed up now wtf?

i would of moved it a bit higher if anything just a bit more its hard to explain exactly where but yea. This sig needs text to look complete but like martin said it does kind of ruin it.

[Mister Krister]

another try. added new font, and tryed what amnesia said

[Ryguy]

I didn't really understand is depth concept. I usually just blur it at the maximum blur that I want. Then I get like a 10% opacity eraser and just erase what needs to be erased going over parts several times to get them at the right opacity.