Too plain for me. Effects are out of place.
Your text could be better too.
Cnc pls and please give feedback, Title explains it
add a lot more
you have way too much negative space
bring the render to the left so its on the right third line
add more into it so it brings the tag together
[IMG]https://i930.photobucke*****m/albums/ad149/MattPreston/God-of-the-ex.png[/IMG]
Shifty sexy shit
[IMG]https://i152.photobucke*****m/albums/s198/blackbliss11/scrcrwgift.png[/IMG]
Looks very much like a wip maybe the first phase
Add more effect to the empty space the effects around him need to be moved the same relative place but move them a little
Never use text on most sigs like this 1 Make the c4ds more visble in background but not alot other than that its pretty good
[IMG]https://i1130.photobucke*****m/albums/m524/XownageX911/Renders.png[/IMG]
Never do what you wont do.
Take out the text. Try to fill up the negative space with a C4D, or maybe move the render. Also, use gradient maps / photo philters.