the lion is too far to the right and the render too far to the right
the smudging is getting better
i would recommend checking out elf and seeing if you can get a hold of some of his psds, will help a lot with your smudging
More smudge. Getting better i think. c&c as always,
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Kyle
War does not determine who is right- only who is left.
the lion is too far to the right and the render too far to the right
the smudging is getting better
i would recommend checking out elf and seeing if you can get a hold of some of his psds, will help a lot with your smudging
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Shifty sexy shit
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Storm (01-22-2011)
I hope the smudging was all you focused on cuz everything else seems kind of pasted with limited blending.
And you taught basically everyone here how?
I think smudging is definitely a thing that you haven't done before you're good at everything else but that it's getting better from the other ones I've seen
It also looks LQ on my iPod that's probably not the case but considering other things don't look like that Im assuming this is either really small or LQ
Ryguy (01-21-2011)
Yeah good at everything but smudging
Storm (01-22-2011)
Yeah I accept my mistake
I just thought that this looked way below par from him its been a long time
Last edited by Fjsieb; 01-21-2011 at 05:17 PM.
I kind of trail off from the focal in this one, maybe because of the length of the tag.
keep it up, practice makes perfect
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Only issue I really see is overall compo.
Smudging improved style wise,
all you really need to do is work on some organization with your trails.
I'll take out the lion and do something with the focal mmmm.
The render was b/w when i started with it so its been really hard to colour :/ Took out the lion to draw attention to the focal. Sharpen the left side to give it more emphasis too.
Last edited by Kyle; 01-22-2011 at 01:59 AM.
War does not determine who is right- only who is left.
it looks better in black and white
add some more contrast and do something about your focal, your main focal is too pale compared to the rest of the sig.
your smudging is well done though, keep it up.