Hatred.

[KingDot]

I just found out about this section! Not sure if this is the right section tho This is my first poem... Not sure if it's good


Why are you so mad at me?
What have I done to make you be?

You give me the coldest stares .
That breaks me into icy air.

When you see me you light up in fire.
Thinking how much I'm a liar.

You want me out of your life.
So you can get rid of something that you despise.

I'll leave right now.
So you won't trigger.
The terrible memory that sparked a bicker.

[[MPGH]Liz]

That's not bad, writing about moments in our lives truly sparks something wonderful when it flows out. Simply stop thinking, and let your heart do the writing.

[Kev]

That's not bad, writing about moments in our lives truly sparks something wonderful when it flows out. Simply stop thinking, and let your heart do the writing.

well said liz. very well said.

[KingDot]

That's not bad, writing about moments in our lives truly sparks something wonderful when it flows out. Simply stop thinking, and let your heart do the writing.

Thank you so much Liz

I submitted my second poem

Hope you guys like it.

[CrustyObama]

That's not bad, writing about moments in our lives truly sparks something wonderful when it flows out. Simply stop thinking, and let your heart do the writing.

Stick that in your Facebook status