Storyline...

[[D]evliin]

Okay so im writing a short story, i need some help from you guys...
Its written in first person and basically hes in a car, with a blindfold on its moving and the people are speaking arabic, ive just got to hes been asked if hes awake and the 2 people have got out of the car, they are about to grab him out of the car

Where do i go from here...

Serious replies only please

[HannibalJr]

They lock him up in a fucking room .

[Alen]

Chopper sound, shooting, unblindfolded and all the Arabs are dead, US army have flags all over the place. Happy endings, fin

[HannibalJr]

Chopper sound, shooting, unblindfolded and all the Arabs are dead, Croatian army have flags all over the place. Happy endings, fin

That sounds way better

[okled]

and thats the end
you should use your mind dumdum
it isnt to hard to make a simple story

[[D]evliin]

and thats the end
you should use your mind dumdum
it isnt to hard to make a simple story

Looking for different ideas, i need some inspiration. dont comment if you dont have anything productive
dumdum.

[HannibalJr]

Looking for different ideas, i need some inspiration. dont comment if you dont have anything productive
dumdum.

There was a guy called Juan...

[[D]evliin]

Serious replies only please

At least people read this bit :P

[mipje]

i dont like it when it has to be serious

[Margherita]

They lock him up, then the S.W.A.T come rushing in and blow up the door as the Arabic's are putting a torch into the guys leg. Then S.W.A.T shoots the Arabics' ass off.

[Wolf]

zombie attack.

[HannibalJr]

zombie attack.

Zombies sucks