Newest Sig Tryed C4D

I tryed using C4D in this one its not to great but its not to bad what do you think?

C4D...? Where?

you can barley see it but its most noticeable by the text I turned down the opacity on it.

try working on making the c4d's stand out. dont just put one in either put more then one and set some to colour dodge to lighten the siggy up, good try overall....and are those movie bar's i see very hard to see actually when its a really dark sig dont use movie bars that often, just a word of advice