persia sig

[odoacer]

[IMG]https://i875.photobucke*****m/albums/ab312/inzizor/Prince_of_Persia_Sig.png[/IMG]

This is my first sig after reading a bunch of tut`s

[Mokou-Sama]

Pretty good man, keep going thast way, u did an excellent piece of art.
On the other hand, I think the txt isn the best (font and all that stuff) and U can easily see that his right arm doesnt blend with the wall (notice the white edge around the blade).

overall 9/10

[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

Is this really your first signature? It's actually pretty good. I'd give it a 8/10. And in future work don't put text in signatures because it's very criticised here in MPGH.

[odoacer]

gamer4evere:
ok thanks, i never noticed any of that

Splinter Cell:
Yes this is my first signature and thanks for the heads up about text.

[Mokou-Sama]

gamer4evere:
ok thanks, i never noticed any of that

Splinter Cell:
Yes this is my first signature and thanks for the heads up about text.

NP. Do as Spliter told ya, text isnt its strong point and u realise sigs are completly different without text. That is still cool so dont worry bout it.!

[Faux]

[IMG]https://i875.photobucke*****m/albums/ab312/inzizor/Prince_of_Persia_Sig.png[/IMG]

This is my first sig after reading a bunch of tut`s

render.....Background....Text.

Sorry to say but to me it looks like the only appearance of effort on this was put into the text.

4/10.

[Xarrofice]

Very nice 9/10.
I actually like the text a bit but next time try to test all the text you have (or download more) until you find a great combo. Also think about text before putting it on. Umm other than that, nice job

[Faux]

Just a heads up for you text fiends. Wacky and cartoon like font's are not always the best options. In most cases, simple fonts like times new roman and arial work amazing.

[H3ARTbreaker]

Looks too plain in my opinion.
He doesn't stand out very well ?

[Ryguy]

Text is acceptable here it's just rarely done in a way that adds to the image rather than take away. In this case it takes away. For one it is a little hard to read either because the name or word is not a common word and the font is also a bit challenging. This causes the viewer upon seeing it to spend more time trying to decipher the text rather than appreciate the image.

As for the actual image: The background is nice but the render and the background clash. The render has a very dark feel to it where as the background has quite the opposite effect. This is a simple atmospheric or lighting mistake. Honestly with a render like that I would have done something a bit darker because it has to do with like killing, fighting, etc. However to fix what you have where I would suggest experimenting with the burn and dodge tools AND/OR gradient maps and photofilters. Besides those things you can adjust the brightness levels as well as the contrast.


It's a great job for your first piece and because of that I'm going to challenge you to do better your next time. Keep it up.

[Faux]

Text is acceptable here it's just rarely done in a way that adds to the image rather than take away. In this case it takes away. For one it is a little hard to read either because the name or word is not a common word and the font is also a bit challenging. This causes the viewer upon seeing it to spend more time trying to decipher the text rather than appreciate the image.

As for the actual image: The background is nice but the render and the background clash. The render has a very dark feel to it where as the background has quite the opposite effect. This is a simple atmospheric or lighting mistake. Honestly with a render like that I would have done something a bit darker because it has to do with like killing, fighting, etc. However to fix what you have where I would suggest experimenting with the burn and dodge tools AND/OR gradient maps and photofilters. Besides those things you can adjust the brightness levels as well as the contrast.


It's a great job for your first piece and because of that I'm going to challenge you to do better your next time. Keep it up.

@Ryguy

Me...You...Collab...NOW!

You start bich.

[Rinzler]

@Ryguy

Me...You...Collab...NOW!

You start bich.

Another Collab, this should be good :P

[Ryguy]

Again? ugghhh. I has a paper to write tmr so maybe ill start it monday.

[Faux]

Again? ugghhh. I has a paper to write tmr so maybe ill start it monday.

Lol no rush bro. Thats why i said you can start. Go at your own pace.

[Ryguy]

@Faux
Send me a render.