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[Zhellbound]

So ive been workin on this one for 3 days or so.
Tell me what you think!


You know, come people just wanna be left alone,
But they cant get away from society,
Cause the evil grin from the leaders,
Smile down upon them.

The bell rings, but nobody leaves,
They all stare blankly into the eyes,
Of the only person that holds power,
But what that one person doesnt know,
Rules are meant to be broken.

So just get up and jump
Throw everything aside and be free,
Nobody can hold you back.
Get out there and have the time of your life.

We just have a lesson to learn,
Not everything is perfect.
There is a major turn to take.
For this isnt a game!

So just get up and jump
Throw everything aside and be free,
Nobody can hold you back.
Get out there and have the time of your life.

But all you have to do,
You have to turn to her,
and look her in the eyes,
And say you love her

[TheLostThumbtack]

Itss OrgAsMic ^_^

[Iwin]

Is this rap?

Get some lines that rhyme bro.

[Zhellbound]

Its not rap, its not anything

I just fking wrote it, and thought id share it with people

[x.navi.x]

zelly. to tell you the truth. it sounds pretty homo to me.

[Zhellbound]

D:
THis is one of my better ones ...

:"(

[Murkforce]

Pretty good. But you could make it have like a rhyme, a beat.

[niks12]

OMG if these are one of your better ones then NVM i dont wanna hear your bad ones :s

[Murkforce]

Shut it, i'd like to see you try.

[GOD]

put more rhymes on it !

[i7vSa7vi7y]

look if u guys can do better then post some if you cant then stfu im tired of all the shit talking

[GOD]

look if u guys can do better then post some if you cant then stfu im tired of all the shit talking

wowowow chill, we or I was telling him a recommendation, so next time he writes a lyrics, it'll be much better !

[i7vSa7vi7y]

wowowow chill, we or I was telling him a recommendation, so next time he writes a lyrics, it'll be much better !

personally i think it wud be way better if it rymed