a nice render would do
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Looks a bit empty on the left. Suggestions please
I see what you did there.
Text would go perfectly on the left.
Put the text "Pretend to see"
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Not having a random black spot would be nice also it looks intentional
Borders also dont work
Signatures like this need a smaller canvas to work with. Theres to much empty space on the left which ruins it, and if you put text on the left it will just bring the attention away from the focal...
I would've added and spread more space/star stocks on that empty place, lower the fill and opacity and set it to overlay, that way you can get a bit of flow into that space and it wouldn't looked to drenched out. Also that open space would be perfect for text, maybe something transparent, bold, and good looking. The black border on the bottom and top is unneeded, without it it becomes better looking.
I love the "glow" beside his right shoulder on the signature, but maybe just lower it down slightly.
Overall IMO getting rid of the border, lowering the lighting beside his shoulder, adding more space/star stocks to that empty space - setting it to overlay - lowering fill and opacity, and adding text would make it look nice.
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