Who do you think won? Moto vs looking4chams

**Moto** · 08-28-2011

This arab queen thinks he beat me.

What do you think?

Me

Code:

Nigga, you in the wrong section
bitch you so fat, gonna need a c-section...
seriously with your ugly avatar
bitch, he looks like he got hit by-a-car
so i heard you're looking for chams?
let me give you some of my jams
im a fly ass nigga, im pretty dope
ill hang you from a tree with a rope
you wanna rap battle me
nigga i just took a pee.

literally wrote that in about ten seconds.

Him:

Code:

if you talkin shit
you can suck my dick
flow so wack
you cant represent
you dont know me
i aint a homie
but i fucked ya girl
so you owe me
and i swag hard
yea im mixin tunes
and if you were a song
then youd be the blues
so get the fuck out
this aint a cock house
I know you like em
but i aint ya spouse
but if you got beef 
come at me
cuz all your shit
was crappy

Me:

Code:

my socks is dirty cuz im running through the trenches
nigga what you know, hoppin over fences 
cuz a nigga know, i just stole from a hoe,
bitch what chu know, suck on my right toe
nigga what you know im staring at you
i wanna fight youuu
beat you up put you in a garbage can
nigga im the man, fuck yo bitch
and she like it like that
i run real fast like nigga what you know
im not rappin to the song no more
nigga whats good
i rap in the hood
nigga whats up
shop at walgreens for goods!
hit her from the back, nigga what you kno
hit your hoe, then i fuck her in the asshole
i wear these white gloves when im killing motherfuckers
nigga what you know ill kill your mother your brother
you sister your gramps and your pappy
nigga what you know, i aint ever fucking happy
unless, im fucking your bitch
what you know, you is a snitch.

Him:

Code:

you dont wear socks, you cant afford em
you just suck cocks, you just whore em
you are lame, your flow is shit
and your girl asked, if she could suck ma dick
yes i hit her bad, and i hit her good
thats why you always find her in ma hood
she ridin me
she likin me
she hates you
go masturbate dude
but dont blame me cuz i pulled her
she left you, you caint deliver
"not tonight for you" shell whisper
but leave the hoe
cuz you already know
your the past tence
im the future yo
and i got you
cuz you talk shit
she said dont mind him
hes just a bitch
cuz i walk it out, n you talk it out
your mom liked my cock, so im ballin out
its a damn shame, i didnt wear a glove
cuz then you were born, i couldnt show no love
but its ok
cuz daddys here
but dont challenge him
cuz the truth is clear
i am the best
i just passed the test
come at me bitch
and ill puff my chest
cuz in real life
you gon bitch out
cuz id fuck you up
id break ya mouth
id jack your jaw
now what im talkin bout
so shut the fuck up
cuz your wack shit
young dubbys here 
with my rap spit

Jabuuty pops in::

Code:

Back off my homie minivan man, don't be mad son, that he's packing all of the hottest chicks in the back
Only test you've passed was that you can't get a real life. Posting shit on MPGH from when you woke up to when you've gotten a cupcake and to even tell us you can sleep without a night light.
Watch your step little cat, 9 lives all taken down by the lines that's coming out.
Crawl back into your little cave and play your free first person shooter games. 
you rap like you're making a 4 year olds story book, but i can't compare the two because the childrens stories put your work to shame.

edit: ouuu. popcorns ready.

Me:

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i apologize for the late response, nigga i was sleepin
you were probably up all night wankin' wankin' wankin'
stab you in the face, nigga you were drivin'
all the way to the hospital, given
a less then 20% chance of livin'
fuck that bitch..
shoot her with the clip..
fucking wit me man..
you can suck my dick.
oh shiit...
nigga fucking with me
you gonna get in a pickle real quick
you gonna see this big veiny ass dick
after you nigga see me, you start runnin
all the bitches see me cummin
im way too lazy to continue this shit
you see, jabuuty's gettin in it
he's my main nigga
dont fuck with him
hes been to the gym
he'll kick your ass
destroy you in a mass
explosion boom.

Him:

Code:

How can you say, 
That I Wank
when ya girl left you
for tom hanks
you got no game
bitch you are so lame
you couldnt pull a hole
whos the one to blame?
shit you are a shame
to the family name
wouldnt call you my son
i wouldnt make a change
i couldnt pay for your
child support
yes a ran away
after I came
But I shoulda stayed
you shouldve been raised
you dont know yo daddy
so you try to play
but its ok
since youve turned gay
girls are immune to you
damn what a shame

Me:

Code:

my girl didnt leave me for no nigga named hank
shes with me right now, giving me a wank
you fat bitch, you wouldnt know
how it feels to have a girl tingle your no
so ill do u a favor, let you know
it feels fucking amazing, like shitting bricks
you wouldnt know, sucking all them dicks
you aint got the power i got, nigga you at the start
nigga im at the end, end of a hella big fart
i farted on your face,
does it feel like mace?
i had a burrito earlier today
i ate it in 2 bites, bitches was like no way
im a boss like that, nigga
dont mess with me, ill fucking kill ya.

Him:

Code:

u sound kinda funny whichya off beat flow,
i coulda swore i heard that rap from ya momma though, 
but what can i say its like mother like son,
yall both have pussys so yall just have fun,
no im not a freestyler i just take my time,
the same way ya grimy mama gave me dat sexy grind
and yo got a girl so what ive had plenty
i dont do relations cuz i fuckem till they empty
stop talkin this shit and admit the truth
young mohammed faidy, neva starts a truce
i fucked ya girl and yea i sucked her juice
9 months past and the baby don look like you
but i aint gonna hate that you got a girl
bring her ass over hear, yes i will shine her damn pearl,
i fucked her so crazy she started talkin like earl,
yo generation is gone, and so is ya girl
but take care of that you bought her with ya gold
even the nice rings that you stole from the old

Thread is here: https://www.mpgh.net/forum/2-general/...freestyle.html

Who won?

**Jazk** · 08-28-2011

1st Quote of Looking totally failed.

**Jakob** · 08-28-2011

Jab wins,

**Margherita** · 08-28-2011

Mostly just cursing and profanity, which isn't freestyling or rapping. You guys didn't really incorporate metaphors and such..

I'm gonna say Jabuuty wins.

**Moto** · 08-28-2011

Originally Posted by Jazk.....

1st Quote of Looking totally failed.

It wasn't creative enough.

Originally Posted by SODMG

Mostly just cursing and profanity, which isn't freestyling or rapping. You guys didn't really incorporate metaphors and such..

I'm gonna say Jabuuty wins.

I did? At least more than my opponent did.

**Dreamerkiid (◣_◢)** · 08-28-2011

kkkkk
rap battle me
kthanx

**lookin4chams** · 08-28-2011

Originally Posted by SODMG

Mostly just cursing and profanity, which isn't freestyling or rapping. You guys didn't really incorporate metaphors and such..

I'm gonna say Jabuuty wins.

there is no thinking to freestyle... you just throw stuff out the top of your head...

thinking and actually perspiring to make a good rap is called rapping :3