The background needs some work. The siggy lacks depth and the render isn't even touched. The text isn't well positioned, and very plain.
Overall I'd give you a 5/10. Keep up the good work, read some tutorials, and you'll improve in no time!
ty been at this for 2 weeks but i was just trying out some styles with that it didnt come out good. ill post a new one soon today been working on it for a few hours now.