Fighting The C4D!

[Mr.Seyeko]

[IMG]https://i784.photobucke*****m/albums/yy121/SeYeKo-/Fighting.png[/IMG]
[IMG]https://i784.photobucke*****m/albums/yy121/SeYeKo-/Fighting-1.png[/IMG]
@Matt
@Doc
@Keroaplt
@Chuck
@Parody
@Cynic
@Kuro Tenshi
@Ryguy
@Faux

[Matt]

Decently well done. I like this piece. Text is still an issue, render doesn't pop out very much (I see him clearly, but it's like he isn't the main part). Coloring is weird, lighting could use a bit of work. This one at least interests my eyes, it's the type of quality that you produce. The one in your signature right now doesn't interest me as much as this one. You can have a simple signature too that interests me, but right now you can't do that. Try to work on this style you have going on.

[Parody]

i would like to see more exposure.

[Rasta]

Nice , but i think if you dd some green//light blue'ish into it would look better

[Mr.Seyeko]

v2 posted.

[Ryguy]

Again, your lighting is a bit messed up. Your focal is a bit undefined because of the light from the C4D and the shadows on the actual focal.

The focal is a bit more clear in the B&W version however.

[[MPGH]Doc]

Its very messy but iunno I still like it. I don't really like the centered focal you have going on, I think if it was to left a bit more it would help a lot.

[Kuro Tenshi]

Really nice, about lighting i only see the render as problem then or a small glowy edge on the front side c4d... Lower one looks the best.

[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

Wow, you've started making some good shit.

[Mr.Seyeko]

Haha thanks guys, its all your feedback thats really helping me improve