First Attempt: Clip Masking
First attempt: Clip Masking

You've taken a big step of improvment! Congratulations!
Seriously!
I really like it, and that's something that get's a 8.9/10 from me. ^.^
The only tiny missing thing is, the left side is too blank, and also it looks very sexy at first glance, but when looking closely, the render and the rest don't match all that well.
wow.. i thought i did a shit job, this is easier than what i was doing before too o-o
oh well, cool..
thanks..