This is a nice aproach to the actual gun, from your ss i think the orange one is better yet the original is the blue one.
If possible make a green one too!
good job btw
this is created in Cinema 4D am i right? xD
Wow that is really cool I never knew you could do that in c4d even tho I do see people modeling guns for there games just never thought anyone would make a portal gun good job!
Looks good!Have you tried putting the white side parts into a hypernurb to smooth them out more?