You're wrong about everything but the text. Even the light source is a minor issue compared to it.
Originally Posted by Paradise`
Deviantart link should not be there, kills the whole mood.
this
I have no clue why you added that
Since i am going to full sail university i have to start putting text like that to show people my portfolio for now. i admit its a lil big. but mehh to me its not a big deal.
Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko
Since i am going to full sail university i have to start putting text like that to show people my portfolio for now. i admit its a lil big. but mehh to me its not a big deal.
if your going to add credits, add it to the corner.
No .
Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko
No .
He actually has a point. Small and in the corner, not drawing too much attention is way better than ruining your art with it.
Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko
Since i am going to full sail university i have to start putting text like that to show people my portfolio for now. i admit its a lil big. but mehh to me its not a big deal.
Not to be a downer but you shouldn't put THAT in your portfolio.
You didn't make the render, text is awful, bad lighting. The lensflare is hardly needed. I think the best part is the background honestly, which again, is not made by you.
Trust me man, if your going for a portfolio this is something that it should not have in it.
Originally Posted by iTzSeyeko
No .
Originally Posted by Ryan
He actually has a point. Small and in the corner, not drawing too much attention is way better than ruining your art with it.