Originally Posted by
Lehsyrus
The percussion sounds like a typical FLStudio line. No filters no added effects it's basic. They cut out at the wrong points and have the same patterns rather than being consistent on keeping you on the edge of your seat. They're also flat.
The drop was extremely boring, nothing exciting whatsoever, and my sub didn't even react.
There is no bassline whatsoever. You need a consistent bassline running at the same pitch's as the wobble bass layered underneath to give the wobble bass more "oomph".
I'm not going any further, fix that and then we'll work on fixing the other minute mistakes.
The wobble bass was repetitive and generic. Very flat and boring. The "wobble" portion was off-time the majority of the time and it didn't sound like a down/up beat nor a half step.
The synths are just bland in general, needs a fuller sound, take a look at major chords in music theory and work on imitating specific key signatures in your music to give it a much more full sound.