Take out the dark vectors, it ruins it completely. Add some motion blur and a border, and it's ready for SOTW.
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Its alright, lighting is off and the effect c4d's look weird.
I'd say, take the black stuff out or paint it white.
A bit blur in the BG could help. And ,maybe color burning the edges with a bit of black or dark blue would be nice too.